Now you have definitely moved away from haiku to senryu. Haiku traditionally deals with nature and the seasons. None of that in this seventh poem. Alphie
I was aware that most of the haikus were not completely true to the form but I didn't know there was another name. I probably don't understand haiku well enough to call it that anyway. Thanks alphie! How are you?
Now you have definitely moved away from haiku to senryu. Haiku traditionally deals with nature and the seasons. None of that in this seventh poem.
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I was aware that most of the haikus were not completely true to the form but I didn't know there was another name.
DeleteI probably don't understand haiku well enough to call it that anyway.
Thanks alphie! How are you?
Ask me that question again in two days time....
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I got the syllable count wrong
DeleteTrump democracy, indeed. How mental was all of that?
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'Fake' democracy.
ReplyDeleteYou're right on with this one.
ReplyDeleteNo that I definitely understand.
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